Вопросы по грамматике английского языка
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04.09.2012 16:48:40

Grammatik überprüfen

 
Nitherecolesa
Es wäre echt lieb wenn ihr den folgenden Text mal durchschauen könntet. Mir geht es nicht um den Inhalt sondern um die Grammatik. Danke :)

I can not really agree or disagree.
There are two views of this topic.
The negative aspects are you can not enjoy your meal because you are reading the warnings everywhere.
And you get a bad conscience and you are in conflict with yourself.
The warnings are not promotional for the products so is not good for the company.
I think the company are not amused when the warnings get a duty on some types of food and drinks.
The other side is that the warnings have a positive aspect and a positive influence of the people.
The humans wake up and there would be animated to eat healthier and better.
The warning is a good option to inform the people about the bad substance.
In the earliest childhood kids learning better eat and healthier life.
The warnings protect against abuse for example to protect kids for alcoholic drinks.
It is a good tip for allergic people or ill persons for example diabetic.
Another example are the zigaretpacks there you can find the warnings.
The warnings shows the customers the possible dangerous for the health of everyone.
The other positive characteristic of warning point is that they have a deterrent function.
The customers should be scary of the results.
I think is a way to show the extreme side but why not?
For some people is it enough to change the life.
Finally you can see that you can not say it is right or wrong to print the warnings on food and drinks.
Another point of view is that the companies should think about the age of the customers. That means they must into line with the age.
A good sample is the sale of energy drinks.
In my opinion should everybody figured out the own personal view.
 
05.09.2012 06:40:05

Re: Grammatik überprüfen

 
Nitherecolesa
Hy guys please ceck out the grammar it is very important for me!!! Thanks

Nitherecolesa писал(а):Es wäre echt lieb wenn ihr den folgenden Text mal durchschauen könntet. Mir geht es nicht um den Inhalt sondern um die Grammatik. Danke :)

I can not really agree or disagree.
There are two views of this topic.
The negative aspects are you can not enjoy your meal because you are reading the warnings everywhere.
And you get a bad conscience and you are in conflict with yourself.
The warnings are not promotional for the products so is not good for the company.
I think the company are not amused when the warnings get a duty on some types of food and drinks.
The other side is that the warnings have a positive aspect and a positive influence of the people.
The humans wake up and there would be animated to eat healthier and better.
The warning is a good option to inform the people about the bad substance.
In the earliest childhood kids learning better eat and healthier life.
The warnings protect against abuse for example to protect kids for alcoholic drinks.
It is a good tip for allergic people or ill persons for example diabetic.
Another example are the zigaretpacks there you can find the warnings.
The warnings shows the customers the possible dangerous for the health of everyone.
The other positive characteristic of warning point is that they have a deterrent function.
The customers should be scary of the results.
I think is a way to show the extreme side but why not?
For some people is it enough to change the life.
Finally you can see that you can not say it is right or wrong to print the warnings on food and drinks.
Another point of view is that the companies should think about the age of the customers. That means they must into line with the age.
A good sample is the sale of energy drinks.
In my opinion should everybody figured out the own personal view.
 
05.09.2012 12:04:00

Re: Grammatik überprüfen

 
fredbär
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Hallo Nitherecolesa,

Below are a few comments and suggestions. Hope they help.

Regards,

fredbär


Nitherecolesa писал(а):Es wäre echt lieb wenn ihr den folgenden Text mal durchschauen könntet. Mir geht es nicht um den Inhalt sondern um die Grammatik. Danke :)

I can not really agree or disagree.

> cannot or can't

There are two views of this topic.

>on?

The negative aspects are you can not enjoy your meal because you are reading the warnings everywhere.

>A negative aspect is that you cannot enjoy your meal because you see the warnings everywhere.

And you get a bad conscience and you are in conflict with yourself.
The warnings are not promotional for the products so is not good for the company.

> The warnings do not promote the products and so are not good for the company.

I think the company are not amused when the warnings get a duty on some types of food and drinks.
???

The other side is that the warnings have a positive aspect and a positive influence of the people.

> influence on

The humans wake up and there would be animated to eat healthier and better.

> Humans wake up and they would be animated (?) to eat more healthily and better.

The warning is a good option to inform the people about the bad substance.
In the earliest childhood kids learning better eat and healthier life.
???

The warnings protect against abuse for example to protect kids for alcoholic drinks.

> protect from

It is a good tip for allergic people or ill persons for example diabetic.
> people with allergies

Another example are the zigaretpacks there you can find the warnings.

> cigarette packs
> example is or examples are.

The warnings shows the customers the possible dangerous for the health of everyone.
> wranings show or warning shows

The other positive characteristic of warning point is that they have a deterrent function.
The customers should be scary of the results.
>scared?

I think is a way to show the extreme side but why not?
???

For some people is it enough to change the life.

>their lives


Finally you can see that you can not say it is right or wrong to print the warnings on food and drinks.

>to print warnings

Another point of view is that the companies should think about the age of the customers. That means they must into line with the age.
>is that companies
>they must be in line with age

A good sample is the sale of energy drinks.
In my opinion should everybody figured out the own personal view.
>In my opinion everybody should figure out their own personal view.


How charmed I am when I overhear a German word which I understand! - Mark Twain
 
 

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